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an old guitarist sitting
on a watercolor hill,

plucking on six strings absent.
two halves of breasts running near

under van gogh's starry night,
under black-white guernica.

everything in all jigsaws,
everything in trepid cubes.

a girl before a mirror
with violin and guitar,

sitting with three musicians
and a woman with her book,

stippling all realities
of intangible maternity.

hours yielding from dalí's clock,
minutes sub-the alchemist

like rain, like raining, like rained—
portraits wilt with abstract smiles.

clear sfumato, oh still life,
napoleon at seven.
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Given 2008-04-17
napoleon at seven by ~trumancoyote is rich with surreal images, and if you're into art, you will enjoy them especially. This poem will be in my pocket today. It shall make it a surreal, beautiful day. Read on! ( Featured by !lovetodeviate )
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:iconrevolvingdoors01:
thanks for writing this, it's officially one of the best poems i've read so far here on deviantart
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:iconselenaru-negrea:
This is so good it reminds me of stuff like Apollinaire or Lorca... And that's a big bonus!
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:iconsydnerella:
amazing poem! the surrealism in it is just like a dream works, on the surface meaning nothing, but far too complex to be without reason. just spectacular - one of my favorite poems on this site!

definitely going to watch you and fave this!
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:icon3rdtimelucky:
I keep coming back to read this poem - I don't know how you did it but I'm in love with this piece
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:iconringo45:
Awesome. I love the art references, especially the one mentioning telling time from Dali's surreal clocks. Also the line "like rain, like raining, like rained" is great repetition to emphasize the permanence of the people in the paintings. Great work.
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:iconbeautified-scene:
i'm sorry i don't have any advanced critique, only this to say:
i absolutely loved the art references :heart:
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~trumancoyote Apr 17, 2008  Professional Writer
it's all good. thanks for reading and commenting regardless.
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~trumancoyote Apr 17, 2008  Professional Writer
Thanks, everyone, for the kind words.
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:iconcrystalclearink:
beautiful work, literature goes underappreciated, you deserved this!
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:iconthenextexpatriate:
art, writing & history... love it!
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